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Thursday, 30 July 2020

My poem

This is a poem I wrote for a video called The windmill farmer

The storm The storm was a terrifying lot of elephants,
Dangerous and destructive.
It charges across the land like crazy.
It is a huge dark grey ball.
The air rumbles like elephants stomping around.
Slashing and breaking anything that stands in its way.
With its feet trembling everywhere. Untameable so nobody stands in it's way.
Smashing, stomping and running.
Big,furious and angry.

3 comments:

  1. I like when The storm The storm was a terrifying lot of elephants,

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  2. It was reley exsiting to me

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  3. Hi Elisa it was great

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